Monday, March 2, 2009

outline

Title

I. Introduction
1. The California Budget cuts affect everyone but has a devastating effect on the California educational system, with these budget cuts tuition prices will rise and some CSU's will have to even deny entrance to students for the first time.

II. 1st paragraph
1. Major and minor effects of the budget cuts on California Schools
-Transition into Tuition Prices

III.2nd paragraph
1.By how much tuition prices will rise for CSU's, how will this affect students...
-Talk about class sizes and class availability if not already mentioned in the first paragraph or touch on it again....
-Use source for tuition increase percentage

IV. 3rd pragraph
1.Denial of students into CSU's
- Mention that this would be a first, how many students would be denied entrance,
-how will the denials affect students, education, economy...
-tie it all together? if possible

V. Conclusion
1. Restate thesis
2. emphasize the importance of education
- restate how this will affect students now and in the future(less educated, possibly)
- California should try to increase the education budget not reduce it



........ first time I have created an outline for an essay so I apologize if it the outline does not seem like much.........

1 comment:

  1. So, we talked about this today. How can you make this thesis revelatory without simply regurgitating our class discussion? Why not simply discuss the shrinking student body? Will SJSU become elite and selective where it hasn't had to before?

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